Feedback from tutor:
Right images should be shown to help the audience understand the social issue and raise people's concern. So it might be necessary to put some pictures to show the relationship between jelly and children's choking hazard.
When reusing the package as a flowerpot, some holes should be made at the bottom of the package to help drain off water if using the method of soil culture. It might be helpful to do some research about hydroponics or soil-less culture.
The labelling is not effective to make people think of planting.The green color can be applied and the brand name could also be related with plants.
Feedback from Peer 1: The design of labeling needs to be considered to show the relationship between package and growing plants. The size of pouch could be smaller if the target consumers are children.
Feedback from Peer 2: The information related to reusing the package should be stated clearly on the package as well as the warning related to choking.
Feedback from other tutors: Wheat grass might be easy to grow and the seeds are suitable to be included in the package. Dark green and mint are suitable colors for labeling.
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